Monday, April 13, 2009

Spring Break

Spring break was the most exciting break I have ever had in Malaysia. I didn’t go anywhere during the summer and winter vacation. However, I went to Club Med in Cherating with my family. Some of the pupils in my school also went to Club Med on this spring break.

My family and I left at about 2pm. My father drove three and a half hours to get there. On the way, we stopped at one rest stop and I bought a Chelsea key chain. I was so glad that we stopped there. The three and a half hour journey was so boring. I didn’t have any thing to do so I just sat in the car and looked out at the view. There were many trees, lakes and rivers. There were different species of trees. They grow very well here because Malaysia is tropical country.

At last, we arrived at Club Med. The first thing I saw was the enormous resort that was beautifully built. After my father got our room keys, we checked out the different places were located on the way to our room There were many places that I could play or use like the swimming pool, drink bar, rest room (there are many air-conditioners) and the Password (A room where only teenagers can go in) Rest room is for the people who are exhausted as swimming or other activities or people who want to read or watch television, come inside that room to relax and rest.

There were many activities to participate in. However, there was not enough time for me to do all of them. On the first day, we couldn’t do anything because we were late. In spite of that, we managed to watch the circus performed by members in Club Med. We also enjoyed free drinks at the bar.

The next morning, I played in the soccer tournament. I was a striker and I scored 3 goals. I was really proud of myself as I was the youngest player of all. The other players were adults. My team won by 3:2. I had an incredible time. I also tried archery. I had never done this before but it was very enjoyable. The only bad thing about archery was that we get injuries such as bruise when we shoot the arrows incorrectly.

I was so sad when it was time to leave. I really enjoyed my vacation. I have never had so much fun in my life so I wish my father will take us there again or maybe, to a better place.

After a 4 days and 3 nights’ long vacation, I just stayed at home. I also had to have tuition every day and had to study a lot. Subjects that I studied were Math, English and Korean (my own language). However, it was fine that I had to study because I was able to play too. I was glad that I went to Cub Med. Finally, spring break was over and I could meet my friends again in school.

3 comments:

  1. Thanks for posting on time. Also, thanks for highlighting your transitions. My comments will follow soon.

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  2. You used your transitions quite well. There is of course room for more practice and improvement. Could you please check for the following before I grade you:

    -Check for articles.
    -"I didn't go anywhere over the summer and winter vacations"
    -three and a half hours
    -What show did you watch? I don't understand.
    -What kind of injuries?
    -An only bad thing = the only bad thing
    -scold? You scolded the three goals?

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  3. Wow, very interesting Ted! I can see that your writing has improved a lot. ( Well, it's amazing how the transition words change the writing. I like your transition words choice. Good job

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